Anyone got any improvments for my deck??

ok now i came 21st out of 41, 2 weeks ago and this is my deck at the moment





Monsters: 4 star and lower





Renge, gatekeeper of dark world


Shadow Delver x 2


Zure, Knight of Dark World x 2


Bite Shoes


La Jinn, The Mystical Genie of The lamp


Snipe Hunter


Jowls of Dark Demise


Brain Jacker





5 star +


White - Horned Dragon


Frostosaurus x 2


Mobious, The Frost Monarch x 2








Spells:


Pot of Avarice


Brain Control


Field Barrier


Premature Burial


Clock Tower Prison


Mist Body


Banner of Courage


Different Dimension Capsule x 3


Smashing Ground


Malevolent Nuzzler


Swords of Revealing Light


Lightning Vortex


Heavy Sorm








Traps:


Dust Tornado


Seven Tools Of The Bandit


Staunch defender


Robbin%26#039; Goblin


Magic Cylinder


Sakuretsu Armor x 3


Conscription


Ultimate Offering


Negate Attack


Call Of The Haunted


Ordeal Of A Traveler

Anyone got any improvments for my deck??
ok, i count 41, which is a bit too much in the build, stick to the 40 card minimum, also, it%26#039;s all over the place, you need a theme, it helps to keep the deck fast, efficient, and consistent. so, i cant make up a decklist without knowing just what you want out of the deck, but i%26#039;ll put down some of the cards that are just terrible, wasted slots.





ordeal


conscription


sak


goblin


stauch


banner


barrier





i dont want to get into the monsters because snipers are seeing a bit of play now, but there%26#039;s too much variety. you cant expect to win consistently with this build, so e-mail me a theme you%26#039;d like to run, and i%26#039;ll make up a build for you, and write up a strategy guide to go with it



necklace